Bonjour,pouvez vous me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît en anglais . Hello, my name is _____. I am 16 years old and from California! I heard abou your Radio sh
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Hello, my name is _____. I am 16 years old and from California! I heard abou your Radio show job and I am here to apply for that! I would like to take part in your radio show an jobs for teens because I feel that I much experience! I have worked with Radio Personality Host, in L.A, I have broadcasted live and interviewed celebrities, and have talked endlessly about all kinds of musi and I plan to continue broadcasting and streaming music live. You can call me back at 6:00.my phone number is 0 6 7 5 9 4 8 3 2 1
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Hello, my name is ------. I am 16 years old and I come from California! I heard about your Radio show job and here I am to apply for it! I would like to be part of your show (faire partie du Radio show// to take part = participer au show/ à toi de choisir) and work for teens . I have already had some experience with Radio Personality Host in L.A. . I have done radio show (broadcast) live and interviewed celebrities yet. I have a public experience talking about all kinds of music. I really want to keep on going on with music industry and radio show live.
You can call me back. My phone number : (213) 594 8321.
je ne suis pas sûr du tout pour "broadcasted" ... C'est pour cela que je ne l'ai pas remis à la fin.
(213) est l'indicatif de Los Angeles. et les chiffres (au hasard) sont disposés comme un vrai n° de téléphone.
je ne prétends pas un zéro fautes non plus....
bonne journée☺☺☺