Bonjour j'aurais besoin qu'on le corrige ou modifie avec des meilleures phrases mon expression écrite svp Merciii. DELMAS Jessey 17/05/2019 International Olympi

Bonjour j'aurais besoin qu'on le corrige ou modifie avec des meilleures phrases mon expression écrite svp Merciii.


DELMAS Jessey

17/05/2019


International Olympic Committee


Object: Poor working condition.


Committee,

I am compelled to write this letter to you because I have learned the working conditions have not been respected during the development of the articles used for the Olympic Games. As far as I know, in China children are exploited from the age of 12 years old he starts working 15 hours a day 7 days a week in the factories, which makes the shoes the bags and the balloons used during the Olympic games. It is clear that these working conditions are not acceptable. I know that the Olympics are important for many countries because it brings a lot of money to the country and therefore to the people. But I find it inconceivable that, after questioning over 300 of your employees we were informed that in China, there are indeed children and people who are exploited during the creation of objects with the logo of the Olympic Games engraved on it. After these revelations it is therefore normal that I warn you and that something is done to remedy this major problem.

Hope that you will pay attention to my letter, with kind regards, with all my greetings,


DELMAS Jessey.